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posted January 20th, 2011, 3:13 pm


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January 20th, 2011, 3:27 pm

CL0CHE

It's the end! And feedback?

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This is the end for now. Updates will resume in a month or so, after the next chapter is sketched out and I take into account feedback from this post (and hopefully improve a little). Thanks for 300 fans <3

If you have time and enjoyed this chapter even a little bit, please please PLEASE provide feedback here so I can make the next chapter better, stronger, FASTER lol


Questions:

- Has this comic been easy to follow dialogue-wise, layout-wise?

- Who's your favorite character, if you have one?

- What do you like best about the first chapter?

- What do you dislike the most about the first chapter?

- Would you like to see more traditional manga/comic textures next time? Or do you prefer the flat gray scale with minimal textures?

- How do you feel about the random joke-type interludes? Examples would be the bit on page 40 and pages 23-24. Stupid, kind of funny?

- Anything else to add? Thanks for reading!! :)

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January 20th, 2011, 3:55 pm

Echocave

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1. Dialouge easy to follow at least for me
2. My favorite character is still that little boy from the begning who made everyone sleep. I wanna hug him. And I have a love/hate relationship with that book
3. Umm...
4. DO NOT CHANGE!
5. I like random jokes the book is funny
6. Nice chatacters and this story shows alot of room for character development.

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January 20th, 2011, 4:43 pm

Bansira

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1. Yes.
2. The princess.
3. Well... the art style jumps to mind instantly. It's that pretty, hehe. Also, I like the setting/world. And the pacing is also great, not too fast not too slow and all that. Also, the humor. I really have nothing bad to point all because I liked it ALL. True.
4. Haha. Like I said above, I don't find any faults. At all.
5. I think the flat grays are quite nice, actually.
6. Truthfully? To me it was an insider joke and i was an outsider. But I tend to like insider jokes when I know what they're referencing, so yeah.
7.Nope, and I thank you for sharing the wonderful story. <3

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January 20th, 2011, 6:15 pm

13yaroza

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Questions:

- Has this comic been easy to follow dialogue-wise, layout-wise?
*Very easy!
- Who's your favorite character, if you have one?
*I frekin love that kid that runs around the building but never steals stuff!
- What do you like best about the first chapter?
*The book's humor was awesome and I really enjoyed the action(?) scene at the start!
- What do you dislike the most about the first chapter?
*That whole thing with the miss.Coco was a bit slow, but nothing bad ^^
- Would you like to see more traditional manga/comic textures next time? Or do you prefer the flat gray scale with minimal textures?
*I really enjoy the art style you are using!
- How do you feel about the random joke-type interludes? An example would be the bit on page 40. Stupid, kind of funny?
*....yes...more...KNOWGH!!!!
- Anything else to add?
*I really enjoy references to earlier plot points ^^

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January 20th, 2011, 6:22 pm

peaceofpie

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Love the comic! Definitely keep it up, I'd keep reading FOR SURE.
Names.... I can't recall the characters names! It might just be me (I'm notoriously bad with names) but maybe use them more so I'll catch on >.<
Other then that silly detail, here are a couple things I thought of...
I like the suspense. I love how ditsy the girl is, and how she wants to go on an adventure. The part with the book seemed to come out of nowhere a bit. Why is the guy willing to listen to it? So maybe, in some respects, slow the story down a bit. Also- the beginning of the comic really captured my interest, so maybe tie that in more as you go along. I imagine you were planning on doing that anyway, but don't let the reader forget about that stuff! It was really good.
Other than that- favorite character is the book guy. Your layout and shading style etc. are all very nice. Keep at it!

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January 22nd, 2011, 8:19 am

Mythee

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- Has this comic been easy to follow dialogue-wise, layout-wise?
Yep! Very easy to follow. ovo Maybe sometimes I find there's not enough content on a page though.

- Who's your favorite character, if you have one?
Litha! She's the character that entertains me the most and also is pretty nice to look at eh, eh? xDD *shot*

- What do you like best about the first chapter?
Your art is great and uh... LITHA BEING AWESOME XD

- What do you dislike the most about the first chapter?
...... I donno man sorry o-o Er... lack of colored pages maybe? @A@

- Would you like to see more traditional manga/comic textures next time? Or do you prefer the flat gray scale with minimal textures?
I like what you're doing now but the others sound cool too. But really just stick with whatever's less of a chore to you, if you get all AUUGH SUFFERING over making new pages you'll stop comicking and the readers will be like NUUUU ;A;

- How do you feel about the random joke-type interludes? Examples would be the bit on page 40 and pages 23-24. Stupid, kind of funny?
I LOVE THE HUMOR
Without the humor I would like this comic less D: KEEP BEING FUNNY PLZ ILU

- Anything else to add? Thanks for reading!! :)
ILU THANK YOU FOR MAEKING PURRDY COMIK!!111oneone! AAAA *yell yell* xDD

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January 23rd, 2011, 8:57 am

Mel (Guest)

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- Has this comic been easy to follow dialogue-wise, layout-wise?

No problem here !

- Who's your favorite character, if you have one?

Well, the one promoted because of his bakery talent is an interesting character, and ther is plenty of possibilities for him to develop.

- What do you like best about the first chapter?

A good rythm and introduction of the characters.

- What do you dislike the most about the first chapter?

Hmm… Nothing really. Maybe the girl is too much of a stereotype for now, but she could reveal more of a personality later.

- Would you like to see more traditional manga/comic textures next time ?

NO
I do prefer flat gray scale with minimal textures !

- How do you feel about the random joke-type interludes?

Well, that's nice not to be serious all the time.


I totally want to see what happens next !

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January 23rd, 2011, 11:02 pm

Yannss(yana. lol it felt weird j (Guest)

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ANYWHOOO lol dude you know i love you and proxxx <3 <3
- SUPER easy to follow!!! I don't remember seeing any fuckups, so you're totally good (Y)

- mmmmm you know i love rhory but he's not here yet LOL. Right now im loving xephy as a replacement 8DD

- i fucking love the yankee to megane ref LMAOO and the book. I LOVE the neverender(is that the name? idk i hope i got that right lmao) 8D

- what do i dislike.. nothing at all LOL. Waiting! ahahah but dude you're a fuckin trooper, you deserve a medal especially next to me.
oh oh, perhaps try to fit more content onto one page? Since it's a webcomic and it gets published by page, sometimes i wish more shite happened on some pages. But Honestly, that's totally up to you 8D it's totally legit either way <3

- i LOVE the style you're using right now! don't change it xD <3 <3

- dude you KNOW i fucking love it. Srsly, if anything insert more lmfao

- ILUUUUU BABEE! <3 <3 MISS YOU also! can't wait till we chill at AN ;O; <3 <3

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January 29th, 2011, 6:21 pm

Yume (Guest)

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Oh man I didn't even know you had a comic before now. I just read that in like 10 minutes. xDD To answer the questions:

1. It was really easy on the eyes. Good stuff.
2. The main character who's name I don't know. /shot D8 It always turns out that way I swear..
3. It was funny and cute.
4. Are you kidding? There was nothing to dislike. <3
5. I actually prefer it how it is. It's simple, clean, and appealing like that.
6. The random jokes are adorable and funny~
7. I have nothing else to add, except. I'm excited to read your comic as it progresses. Keep up the good work!

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